Helmy Patent Non-destructive Anatomy Edit (tm) Approaches!!
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I really like your original piece so far I have to say. I like the posture because it gives character. I'm also very glad to see a realistic hips and bellies in girls and not that awful idealized-by-proxy stuff most people do. My edit addresses a few issues you'll need to look out for:
* shoulders, if anything for a warrior would need to be a bit wider
* arms, do arms studies
* breasts need to be apart a bit more
* avoid 'shoop' type bellybuttons like in marvel comics or some anime. Belly buttons can be innies or outies and have all sorts of wonderful different shapes!
* I gave her some generic legs.
Personally I find the whole pose a bit static so if you're willing to re-place all limbs I'd go with her sitting on a rock or on a warrior steed or something, the sky's the limit from where you are now and it's time to make these artistic decisions before starting rendering.
On top of everything, a lot of non-obvious volumetric issues are illustrated for your convinience.
Now, as far as the pixel artisms go, this is a big image, you might want to work smaller, you only can tell if you have the guts to finish a big piece like this.