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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #50 on: January 03, 2006, 09:11:06 pm »
I'm in a slump but I'll try to muster up a portrait soon.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #51 on: January 03, 2006, 09:33:51 pm »


I really need some help with the sleeves, and some overall shading tips would be nice, but i'm pleased.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #52 on: January 03, 2006, 09:47:08 pm »
So beautiful Schu :o I love it!

I'm already working on mine, but you'd better not expect anything, at least soon, because I've been full of work lately, and now school started :-\ besides, it'll be my first fighter sprite :-[

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #53 on: January 03, 2006, 10:38:52 pm »
Yay, I made something  :D




Cross between a panther/lion/human thingie?
Don't ask me what he is holding in his hand, but it looks like it has died an unpleasant death.

Or is dieing an unpleasant death...


What?  :D



Portrait to come later.


I really stink at doing legs..
Any tips are really welcome  ;)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #54 on: January 03, 2006, 11:10:19 pm »
St0ven: Why am I under the impression that you're not actually that rugged looking?

M Bison: That's a decent picture, but could you go for something a bit more original?  I don't feel like adding a pre existing fighting character.

Schu: Something about the simplicity of that drawing and the shading just sucks me in.

Gazette: ...

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« Last Edit: January 03, 2006, 11:29:28 pm by Scuba Steve »
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #55 on: January 03, 2006, 11:22:27 pm »
Ooh~
I really want to join in but I doubt I could make it before Friday if it's going to look at least a little decent

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #56 on: January 03, 2006, 11:29:51 pm »
There's no time limit.
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #57 on: January 04, 2006, 12:24:52 am »
Scuba, that's really nice, mind if i use it like that, or do you want me to use that as reference to make my own?

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #58 on: January 04, 2006, 12:40:01 am »
Entirely up to you.
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #59 on: January 04, 2006, 01:55:12 am »


Added my own little touchups and some alternate colors. Onto the portrait now. What do all of you think?

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #60 on: January 04, 2006, 02:02:27 am »
I personally like the blue version better. Goes better with the pale white skin. Are those dog ears?

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #61 on: January 04, 2006, 02:05:24 am »
Cat, actually. Tiger if you want to get really technical. His name, Torayaki, means fried tiger.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #62 on: January 04, 2006, 02:23:07 am »
Really.  :o Are you japanese? Or did you just learn that somewhere else.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #63 on: January 04, 2006, 02:55:26 am »
The girl who inspired his design thought it up for me. She's pretty cool.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #64 on: January 04, 2006, 04:28:45 am »

Crazy Guy in SF3 style


I don't really do portraits, i threw this together in about 10 minutes.
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #65 on: January 04, 2006, 04:34:51 am »

will probably animate her later, but first i'll do the portrait.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #66 on: January 04, 2006, 04:52:32 am »

9 col.

Excuse me. No portrait yet. Also not quite SF style.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #67 on: January 04, 2006, 06:17:41 am »
I definitely sucked at pixelling during the last KOS, so I'll try to whip up something good enough this time around.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #68 on: January 04, 2006, 11:11:02 am »
Yeah I'm in. I'll fire up pro motion right now and see how it goes.

EDIT:




heh, really didn't feel like going for another 'jeans and t-shirt' theme, so since I was listening to the Fields of the Nephilim, I decided I might as well go for a western outfit. KOF games are outrageous enough so that something like this might fly. Obviously western helm knows no actual martial arts hence the unguarded gunslinger stance. But no guns. He stands no chance!

technically wise, this deviates a lot from more proper KOF or Capcom styles, as there's dithering, an alternate lightsource and a very unified palette ( there's no way this can be palette-cycled in case two players wanted to play the same character, for example) but a little bit of variety will make the final selection more interesting I think.

Portrait later.

EDIT 2:

I wanted to critique as well, so here we go.

Scuba: new one much, much better than the last one. The last one has no proper center of gravity at all, he would fall over. The animation, although afterthought-ish, is inventive, nice usage of the scarf, and yeah, the fingers are a pain but you did a very good job. Nice, vibrant colours fit the mood of this type of thing fine.

Portrait's not as good. The left arm is severily short. T-shirt kinda plain in terms of interesting wrinkles, but I guess that's just a nitpick. I dig the pointing hand, but the wrist there doesn't connect right.

Captain Blood:

by the way, Captain Blood. There's copies of you all over the gallaxy, and they're after your vital fluids. You better go to their planets and kill them. Good luck with your mission.

As to the sprite, I've seen it before. dislike the heavy usage of black. It palette-shifts nicely enough, the more human-skin-toned one is my favourite version. You've invented a lot of muscle groups for this, but I guess that's sorta ok as well, depends on how realistic you want this to feel.

Acke:

Nice sprite in design, suffers from some issues. The pant folds and shading are too random, I think. Both arms are a bit malformed and do not suggest a fighting pose as much as someone flailing their arms about after they've fallen asleep. Like the face detail, and the colour selection's ok, besides the pure grays you should basically just avoid.

TakaM:

the lower Ken-like pose does not sit well at all with the limp arms and general out-of-balance body above. NEVER rip stuff, even if it's just toes and cloth highlights as in this case. What you basically did with the body is rob out all the dynamicism of the pose by making the arms perfectly horisontial or vertical, in right angles, facing directly down or in front. Human bodies, especially bouncy martial arts stanced and whatever tend to be all odd-angles and covering space for defense or quick jabs. You're got your fighter basically doing the robot with the top of his body, while in a karate stance with the lower part. Doesn't work. Extra points for little big adventure reference, though. And the Portrait works quite well, especially considering you're 'breaking style' with the simplified Twinsen face.

Robert:

The sprite isn't done. AA outlines, clean up colours, highlits. Do more shading. Right now what you've got is closer to lineart than finished sprite.

Skalle:

Overal a nice piece. Sadly the cloth folds are really not working at all. All of them look random and 'draped'. They don't follow the body beneath them, and seem like connected cardboard pieces. Generally your sprite suffers from looking like a paper cut out doll. A clearer overhead lightsource and a reworking of all the folds might help the case. Face and hair look fine.

Ruyumaru:

jarring colour choice, blanket shading everywhere, impossible folds for cloth, anatomy issues, no understandable lightsource.

Scuba's second piece:

Nice pants, you're wasting the blue shade on the coat, too close to black right now. Generally a simple but effective sprite. I'd aa the little bit of facial hair there, but no biggie.

Silver:

do not mirror human beings. Also study anatomy, as you've got a very weak grasp of it. Why is your character wearing a scarf like scuba's. He doesn't in the portrait.

M Bison: what scuba said

Stoven:

this is it, more or less. Best entry so far, and by far. Study this here, everybody. No real crits besides the stray pixel on the piece of wood there. Excellent work, Stoven.

Splat: nice to see you do some small work for once. It's a simple but effective sprite, although the colour choice leaves a bit to be desired and I'm not sure if the pose would work in a game. Unless it's a mid-frame from some introduction movement or something.

ejay:

very, very good. The sprite suffers a bit from being top-heavy and out of balance, but the folds are nice. The pants could use a bit of reworking, though, especially the right (ours) leg. The colours are great, the portrait works very well. Simple KOF two shade-and-buffer folds, all correct. Going from the second shade to pure black might be too harsh, though.

Schu:

simple, but again, effective. Any way you cut it, I think the head's too small for those legs, though. Or maybe the legs should be toned down a bit. Folds could be worked more, but eh, matter of preference and style. Nice shoes.

Gazette:

Pants too large, and whereas you've got the KOF-type circular shading thing going on, you go from darkest to brightest very fast. Might go with a bit more gradient spacing. Personally prefer the green version.

Demented Hero:

I'd start with studying anatomy a lot. There's lots of errors and I don't think you'd benefit from tweaking this point-by-point.


Cold Mage:

Pretty nice animation, the straigthjacket could do with a lot more angles and folding, it's not made of fat rubber. Head too small for feet again, so I suppose this is following some Capcom unwritten rule about head-to-feet-ratio I haven't observed?

Kenneth:

simple style, underdetailed by my standards, but you know what you're doing, so I'll shut up on that end. I'm not uptight or anything but I think the panty shot is unwarranted in this case. It's an idle stance, save that for some sort of roundhouse kick I guess? Dig the little earth people a lot.

Crazy Asian Gamer:

Pick a brighter palette, shade, and study anatomy and the general fundamentals of drawing, really. There is more specific pixel art critique to be made but I'm not sure there's going to be much benefit from it.
« Last Edit: January 04, 2006, 02:59:22 pm by Helm »

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #69 on: January 04, 2006, 03:52:51 pm »
Thanks helm !
I well do some anatomy studies .
The scarf issue , well .....  he dont wear it all the time .
your entrie is amazing by the way .

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #70 on: January 04, 2006, 04:23:48 pm »
As to the sprite, I've seen it before. dislike the heavy usage of black.

Then you're gonna hate the portrait.  It too uses a lot of black.  And I ain't changing that because I currently love using black and find it interesting to build the colors coming out of a sort of shadow and it suits the subject matter.  Plus I just got sick and tired of all the colored outline techniques and I grew tired of Capcom's style and never much liked SNK's at all, so I don't feel like copying them for this.  I do a lot of black and white sorta horror comic art these days and the sprite reflects that.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #71 on: January 04, 2006, 07:23:17 pm »
Hey,

I'm in

My old character "Yamabushi"



portrait coming tomorrow
« Last Edit: January 05, 2006, 02:37:06 am by Kazuya Mochu »
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #72 on: January 04, 2006, 07:57:49 pm »
"Ruyumaru:

jarring colour choice, blanket shading everywhere, impossible folds for cloth, anatomy issues, no understandable lightsource."

im really just doing this for fun, fighter sprites definitely arent my thing anyway.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #73 on: January 04, 2006, 08:05:48 pm »

Getting an update + portrait later. Oh, and this thread rawks!!!!




DIE YAMBUSHI!

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #74 on: January 04, 2006, 08:12:40 pm »
Thanks helm, you're right, I don't know an aweful lot about anatomy.
Time to learn some new stuff ^^

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #75 on: January 04, 2006, 09:28:43 pm »
Helm, your c+c really helped, just one small thing, the pants are supposed to be huge. Think of them as less-crowded goth pants.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #76 on: January 04, 2006, 09:51:21 pm »
Ok I think I'm done.  Kept it to 16 colors just for practice.  Fastest pixel piece I've ever done in relation to size.  Sketched last night and pixelled today, which to those who know my usual work speed, is a miracle.  Anyways I'm pretty pleased with it.  Tried out some technique ideas I'd been wanting to try for a while.  Yeah it's a tad big so crop if it exceeds the max size.  I best get on with the contract work I'm late with now, eh.

EDIT:  Updated version posted further down
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #77 on: January 04, 2006, 09:58:13 pm »
Captain blood, let me tell you how much i love that.

Alot.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #78 on: January 04, 2006, 10:12:50 pm »
Scuba's second piece:

Nice pants, you're wasting the blue shade on the coat, too close to black right now. Generally a simple but effective sprite. I'd aa the little bit of facial hair there, but no biggie.
Wasted how so?  I wasn't specifically trying to stick to a specific palette limit.  I could have snagged the dark blues fro his shirt but I kind of liked the dark blue jacket highlights, what would you have suggested?
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #79 on: January 04, 2006, 10:13:30 pm »
Hmm, looking at my pic now I think the hand looks awkwardly positioned here.  On the pencil sketch ideas he has that arm pulled all the way back up and behind him and the other arm down diagonally and the long hair elbow spikes sorta formed an invisible diagonal line right through the picture.  Doesn't seem to work as well without the rest of the pic.

Ah well...  it'll do.
« Last Edit: January 04, 2006, 10:20:37 pm by Captain Blood »

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #80 on: January 04, 2006, 11:23:32 pm »
It's not about palette limit, it's that the dark blue is too dark, can't really make it out against the black, and therefore I would suggest you lightening it up just a tad.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #81 on: January 04, 2006, 11:27:36 pm »
Here's mine. I did it 2 days ago.


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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #82 on: January 05, 2006, 01:46:57 am »
wow captain, i absolutely love it. looks like it came straight from an anime( emphasis on tv more than the anime style with the scan line thing and all)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #83 on: January 05, 2006, 03:03:56 am »


here is my entry I work on the portrait soon....

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #84 on: January 05, 2006, 03:32:04 am »


Yes, ol' silvir really is a rockstar...


I must admit, I'm very impressed with the entries thus far. Heck, I figured it would be a piece of cake to get my entry onto the thing... but now... not so sure. :)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #85 on: January 05, 2006, 08:23:06 am »


Gil: I really liked your image but I wasn't sure if his face was intentionally odd or not.  His eyes were really bugging me so I pulled them down a couple pixels to match up with the center of the face.
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #86 on: January 05, 2006, 09:10:42 am »
Last update .


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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #87 on: January 05, 2006, 03:29:58 pm »
Gil: I really liked your image but I wasn't sure if his face was intentionally odd or not.  His eyes were really bugging me so I pulled them down a couple pixels to match up with the center of the face.

Well, the mascara is intentional, but yeah, the eye might have been too high up. Yours seems a little low, so I'll be sure to check it over again for the final version. Thanks for the comment :)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #88 on: January 05, 2006, 04:06:01 pm »
meh...
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #89 on: January 05, 2006, 05:48:15 pm »
Hey Scuba, how big should we make the backgrounds? I've got no idea what the dimensions are.  ???

[edit]
My character... Kinda small in size compared to what others made, but I wanted it to match be similar to st0ven's~

Will work on profile 'n idle anim tomorrow/later. <3


Comparison:
VS
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #90 on: January 05, 2006, 07:03:31 pm »
The height of the shown background is 212... if you look at the flash it's basically a 212 x212 square that you'll see that is cut in half diagonally.  So I guess... any width... but know that only that much will show.
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #91 on: January 05, 2006, 07:42:19 pm »
WereDog... well actually it looks more like a WereRat.

took quite some time but it just flew by. i needed to start pixeling more again anyway.


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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #92 on: January 05, 2006, 07:56:53 pm »
Ok. So I decided to redo mine. While doing so I changed the design a bit I guess...
STILL not happy with the hair...


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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #93 on: January 05, 2006, 08:57:33 pm »
Ok. So I decided to redo mine. While doing so I changed the design a bit I guess...
STILL not happy with the hair...



well the hair is very bright compared to the rest of the character, it looks completely out of place.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #94 on: January 05, 2006, 09:34:25 pm »
Acke, if you'd like, i'm pretty good with hair and i could help you think of something that you'd like, honestly, i think he looked better before, but that's just me.

Anyway, i'm working on my mugshot now so save me a spot or something D: After looking at the KOS 2k3, i don't really understand where anything but the mugshot comes in, call me stupid if you want, i am, but yeah.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #95 on: January 06, 2006, 12:50:08 am »
I'm working on a character for this:


the portrait I think I'm going to have to work on the outlining, but it's mostly done.  The small head next to it is the head I've done for my fighter sprite, I'm having a lot of trouble with the body because I haven't done much work with fighter sprites before.

Also, since this is my first post here, I'd just like to say hi.  I'm sure some of you remember me from other forums--I recognize TakaM, Helm, Peppermint Pig, and a few others on this forum from Pixelation, and TakaM I remember even further back at the old ZFGC forums back when zelda fangames were still around.  I'm trying to get back into the community after being away for a bit.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #96 on: January 06, 2006, 02:23:49 am »
Void: I really love this but the one thing that irks me is the pattern on his pants' leg.  The pants bend and fold but the pattern does not, it just hovers over the folds.

Gil: Try some different things out then, just remember that eyes (on humans) are in the center of the face.

Bo: I think you may want to swap legs that are forward.  You drew a leg darker on purpose to indicate that it was in the foreground compared to the foreground leg... but I think they're mixed up.

Acke: The hair is really out of place as other mentioned... the rest of him is very natural and then his hair glows in the dark.  That looks linfe for the glowing machine stuff but not his hair.

reydragk: yeah, that will look much better removing the black lines.
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #97 on: January 06, 2006, 02:34:35 am »
How about we invite Efex  http://galeon.com/efex/web/page1.html



to this little activity?

I think we could use his style critiques, and I think he could use visiting a non-edit based board...what do you guys say?

VOID: cool stuff, yours actually looks like out of CVS with a little of ROTD mixed in.....it IS from scratch right?...dont take it the wrong way ;)
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #98 on: January 06, 2006, 02:51:11 am »
Thanks Helm for the critque. I took your advice and tried to study St0ven's sprite. I read up on his tutorials and read other materials. Here's the new sprite.



The Portrait is still WIP.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« Reply #99 on: January 06, 2006, 04:04:34 am »
Wow, I remember the first one I still have my half completed entry for it on my other computer hah. Great stuff so far too. I'd love to make an entry but I don't really have any idea's for a character so I guess to the sketching board it is.

Ro83rt- you have a nice improvement but the folds in the clothes could still use some work the darkest tone you have outlining the folds makes them look to rigid. Look at some of the sprites Camus posted or other snk, capcom stuff. Keep up the good work. (sent pm)
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